Everybody
dream to have a perfect world, but does perfect world exist? And is there any
"Utopian" world? . Nowadays war is everywhere. Peace is lost, food is
not found, and education not provided for everyone. "Dystopia"
is the perfect word for describing our life these days. However, Having a
utopian life is having the ideal community that has secured, sated, and well-educated
people.
First, having a peaceful society will
help to enhance the feeling of being secured. As a result, people will grew up
in a healthy environment. Researchers show that people who suffered from war in
their country they tend to have more unhealthy conditions. In addition to that,
they died much faster than the people who live in a safe environment. Ghobarah, H., Huth,P., & Russett, B. (2004). stated, that "war produce long-term damage to
public health and medical system". In fact, these long- term affects them psychologically. These issues might not be
healed easily. Also it will impact their perspective toward people and life. As
the prominent philosopher Thomas More puts it, "There is nothing
more inglorious than that glory that is gained by war".
Another factor for a utopian society is
food security. War might affect the amount of food that is provided for the
society. Lack of food will affect people's health and that will lead to a illness,
sickness. As a result, society will not develop because people will be unhealthy
and powerless to do something.
Nevertheless Education, which plays an
important rule in all effective societies. It’s the key for successful
generations. It promotes development in all areas of life situations. Education
is one of the most essential rights for people. Each person deserves to learn
and to use what he/she learns toward a better life.
To sum up, there is nothing perfect in this
life and that leads us to a conclusion with no perfect world. Moreover, peace,
food, and education are three important elements for having a happy, secure, and ideal
world.
References:
References:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Utopia
http://philosophynow.org/issues/70/Visions_of_a_Perfect_World
Ghobarah, H., Huth,P., & Russett, B. (2004). The post -war public health effects of civil conflict:Social Science & Medicine 59
http://philosophynow.org/issues/70/Visions_of_a_Perfect_World
Ghobarah, H., Huth,P., & Russett, B. (2004). The post -war public health effects of civil conflict:Social Science & Medicine 59
It is a very good passage talk about some reality problems exist on the world. I agree with you that we must solve those problems that we can reach the perfect world.
ReplyDeleteHi Nada!
ReplyDeleteI like your using your documentation resource well, and the references are very clear. Seems like peace is the most important element in your perfect world, I like it!
When I read the first paragraph I felt like I want to read more because in my opinion she has an interesting and organized writing style. Also, she emphasise that we live in Dystopia, but she manage to describe the three essential things in utopia from her point of view.
ReplyDeleteI like what you have mentioned above. I agree with most of points that you have. I believe that we share the same concept of perfect world.
ReplyDeletewhen I read the first paragraph I felt that I am reading for a doctor :P
ReplyDeleteyou have focused on the health aspect a lot which I liked
I liked very much Nada. Your introduction is awesome because this paragraph really make us think about our world, and how everything works nowadays. I also liked your outside sources,it shows a high level of research on the topic.
ReplyDeleteHi Nada,
ReplyDeleteI agree with most of of what you wrote, mainly in the paragraph where you mention the importance of education. Good job!
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ReplyDeleteHi Nada, You brought up some of the key issues that many leaders around the world are working on to bring about change. Your point about war is so important. It seems like no other progress can be made if a society or country is at war. You also excellently tied this in the education. I wonder what the research says about how war affects children in terms of education.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful post.